1. Mr. Streetsider sir, there's a bullet somewhere with your name on it.
2. Really digging this mass writing biz. Shall we publish when we're done?
3. Here goes nothing.
The instructions:
1. You take the story, and give it your own unique twist.
2. Link back to the blogger who whispered to you and or include their name in your post.
3. Whisper the new challenge into the ear of a blogger of your picking.
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Pass it on with the instructions!
Maama Jacob woke with a start. Her body and bed were drenched in a cold sweat and ice clamped around her heart. It didn't help that even with her eyes wide open, swinging from one corner of the room to another, she could see nothing. The darkness was total. She took a deep breath and fought the irrational urge to lunge for her bedside torch.
She'd had a horrible, horrible dream. Of that she was sure. What she couldn't remember was what it had been about. Something about a luminous computer screen. But that was stupid. The only computer she'd ever had- which, at that moment was sitting under a pile of old stuff in the store- hadn't worked in eons! What could have been so frightening about a mere computer?
'Return of the killer Mackintosh', she mocked herself, trying to still her vibrating heart. No, that wasn't nearly scary enough. 'Night of the living PC'. That felt okay but surely she could do better. And then she had it. Sounding a drum roll under her breath, she said as loud and as clearly as she could, 'THE MOUSE'. That elicited a chuckle from her. Suddenly, she felt worlds better. She decided to go check on her babies since she was up.
Ellyn made her way carefully through the dark corridor. She knew every turn and potential trip point in her head. For her, switching on the light, after that nasty dream, would have meant she was afraid. She wasn't. When she reached the room Jacob shared with his little sister, she switched on the light . Standing by the door, watching them sleep, she was reminded of how easily she could have had no one to take care of. Jacob, she'd expected. She didn't regret what she'd had to go through, even as her mind shied away from the string of events that had brought him to her. Sarah on the other hand, was a total miracle, she was born a year and a half after Jacob. She'd been totally unexpected. Maybe...maybe if she'd known that all she had to do was wait a little longer, she wouldn't have... but that was all in the past now. Best to look ahead.
Sarah slept peacefully: on her tummy with her palm cupping her sweet apple-round cheek. She was a beautiful child. So beautiful that sometimes, it hurt looking at her. She'd inherited her daddy's long face but had put her own little label on it with her shapely nose, full lips and long lashes. She'd be a beauty one day. Problem was, she knew it and used it against any and everyone.
Jacob,on the other hand, slept with nary a trace of softness. He lay on his back with his bed covers tossed to his waist. He seemed rather ...stiff. For the first time, Ellyn noticed his arms taut at his sides, one little clenched fist visible. He seemed to be resisting something in his sleep. The idea worried her and she rushed to sit at his bedside. She stroked his face and his little fist, all the while whispering promises of comfort and safety, telling him how much he meant to her. She hoped he could hear her from wherever he was. Her dear, dear boy.
Maama Jacob. That's what they called her but she han't felt like his maama in ages. They used to be joined at the hip when he was smaller but lately, well, they weren't. Was it right for a boy so little not to need his mummy? These days, the only person he seemed to open up to was Hez, and even that wasn't necessarily a good thing.
Hez the grouch. She smiled at the thought. He spent so much energy acting mean, no wonder he always looked tired and irritable. It made sense that he didn't want anyone's pity but surely he could discourage it in another way. He did such a good job of playing ogre that almost everyone half feared, half revered him. But with Jacob it was different; he actually seemed to love the boy! If she had no other proof of Hez's goodness, that alone was enough.
She was brought out of her reverie by a little hand clutching hers. When she looked down, Jacob was awake, silently enduring her mindless caress. She watched, startled, as twin tears seeped out of the corners of his eye's . Holding her palm to his cheek, he whispered brokenly,
" I won't let me hurt you mummy. Promise."
Okay. that's all folks. I'm whispering this in Esquire's ear.
Thursday, June 25, 2009
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Whoa! Nice, very nice. I am loving this. :)I confess I wouldn't have known what to do with the story if you had left me tagged. When I started the chain, I wasn't expecting all the twists. Lol.
eh? have to read again.
this business is too tight!
too tight!!
No pain.
I like, I like! All the twists and turns are keeping me on my toes.
@Princess
Thank you.I almost botched the whole business but I guess Hez's ghost's watching over us.
@Fable
Did it make sense, if it didn't, go start at Princess', I'm bad with directions, after that,
@Spartakuss
Gracias amigo.
@yz
Yeah, this story idea was a stroke of genius, The bloggren is gon' fill the void MJ left. In a good way of course.
this stuff is the shizzo...i love the different twists; was wondering how anyone would recover from Streetsider's horror twist to tht thing; nice wak R
it was all a dream?!
AWWWWW!!!
someone bring back the fleash eating children zombies!!
lol
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